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Laura Lynch's avatar

I couldn't stop reading! I needed to get to the end. That was superb! :D

Martin Fischer's avatar

That honestly makes me so happy to hear. I really wanted the story to pull the reader forward step by step, so knowing you couldn’t stop reading is the best compliment. Thank you, Laura!

Laura Lynch's avatar

You’re so welcome! It was SO good!! 😊

Jason Beech Messy Business's avatar

Enjoyed that.

Martin Fischer's avatar

Glad you enjoyed it, Jason. Thanks for reading.

Me, Ana Kely…'s avatar

Wow!!! Again, the atmosphere of suspense that surrounds me, while I read I talked to myself “but what can this be?” ... I felt Marlene’s life, at first her calm, then apathy, then the affliction in knowing what was happening. Wonderful, I loved it!

Martin Fischer's avatar

Your comment really moved me, especially what you said about feeling Marlene’s life as the story changed around her.

I wanted the suspense to come first from atmosphere and uncertainty, so it means a lot that you experienced it that way.

Thank you so much, Ana.

Dahlia D's avatar

This was skin-crawlingly wonderful. Loved it.

Martin Fischer's avatar

“Skin-crawlingly wonderful” is such a perfect phrase for this story. Thank you, Dahlia. I’m so glad it got under your skin in exactly the right way.

I.P's avatar

I LOVED THIS YES YES YES YES !!!!

Martin Fischer's avatar

This made me smile so much. Thank you. I’m thrilled the story landed for you like that.