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Cael Lawenu's avatar

I appreciate your ability to build momentum and intrigue through varied sentence lengths, repetition, and dark metaphor.

Martin Fischer's avatar

Thank you very much, Cael. I really appreciate that. I was trying to let rhythm, repetition and image do part of the unsettling work, so I´m very glad that came through for you.

Parker McCoy's avatar

Very interesting monster. I'd say that hitting up the tavern there is a bad idea anytime. Hehe. Maybe it led him to rethink his life a bit, though. Cool story, Martin.

Martin Fischer's avatar

Thanks a lot, Parker and yes, the Büchel probably isn’t the place for one drink too many after dark. I’m glad the Bahkauv came across for you.