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Fred Szkoda's avatar

TOO SCARED!!

Roads Untraveled's avatar

Fantastic story! Is the wardrobe possessed, or is the man insane? Wonderful the way to pace becomes increasingly frantic until the payoff - the discovery that he wasn't seeing exactly what he thought each time.

Martin Fischer's avatar

Thank you so much. I’m truly glad the story resonated with you. The question of whether the wardrobe is possessed or whether madness shaped his vision… that ambiguity is the core of the unease, isn’t it? I’m especially pleased you noticed the pacing shift, like a breath slowly tightening until there’s no air left.

Your words mean a lot. Thank you for reading The Wardrobe in the Window.

Amanda Izzo's avatar

Loved this!

Suspenseful, well written, and layered in detail! I enjoyed reading 🧡